Where?

I sometimes wish on stars
I sometimes make selfish wishes
All about me
No one else

I sometimes think of thoughts
Thoughts that are good
Some that are horrible
But the think I think
Are never on myself

I sometimes dream
Sometimes about me
Mostly about the people around me
And in those dreams
I'm never there

I always wondered what this meant
These three little things
Wishes for myself
Thinking of others
Dreaming of others without I?
Would it mean that

I am selfish when it comes to me
Even so
I like to help other people out
At the same time though
I can see their lives without me?

Where does that place me
In this weird little universe of ours?

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but you've left out an 'are' in line six. You don't have to close every line in a poem with punctuation, either - I feel like this would feel more complete if you took out basically every comma in the piece. Other than that, you have a good concept and you've elaborated on it well. Good work.

[Angel Charles]

I see, thanks, and thanks for reviewing my work! :)