See through

See through

A Poem by Ian Hammond
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List of 12 poem or whatever

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Damn this nervousness
Blood flowing, fear
Crystal ball tell me my future
it's so unclear

Throw me your tarot cards
Time to see with my own eyes
Break the silence
and rise

Oh no, why did this happen?
Forgive me please
Is this truly real life?
i didn't plan to leave

© 2015 Ian Hammond


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This flows really well ((my favorite structure for rhyming)), but I also like the questioning and uncertainty behind it all.
Good job ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 3, 2015
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Ian Hammond
Ian Hammond

Worthington, OH



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