To an extent

I love you....

To an extent

 

I love the way

you hold me tight

I love the way

you make my spirit bright.

I love the way you

kiss me tenderly

I love the way you

let me be who i want to be

 

To An Extent.

 

I love the way

you make me feel

I love the way

you make your deals.

I love the way you

wait for me in the morning

I love the way

you trap me like morning glory.

 

To An Extent.

 

I cant love you more

I cant love you less

My love is like a locked door

or a game of chess.

 

So find the key

or find the stratagy

to unlock my door

before you try to score.

 

Reviews

[Periac]

this ending was awesome....i read through it a few times....smiling upon the end each time.....similar to shouting at the end of a whisper

[Dark Angel ~]

Beautiful

[Tasha]

Very nice and creative.
"I cant love you more
I cant love you less
My love is like a locked door
or a game of chess.

So find the key
or find the stratagy
to unlock my door
before you try to score."
That was brilliant and so well put together.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Very nice. Well written and full of feelings, to an extent. The next to last stanza, "My love is like a locked door or a game of chess." Great visual conflict. The door has one real opening, chess however is ever changing based on the players. Nice!

[AndyJCash]

Very cleverly executed piece and the simile/extended metaphor at the end was great.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet piece of work. Explicitly stated, wisdom for the ages.

[....]

This one pulled me in, i really enjoyed the words. They made me feel it's okay to be who I am and to look behind every corner. That there is always something there. Love is such a wonderful feeling I know but I can't get my heart to say its okay. I loved this write. Thank you for making me feel this write....xo