Forever

I’ll miss you forever
And not a day less
I’ll miss you forever
My mind won’t rest

I’ll miss you forever
Night and day
I’ll miss you forever
In every way

I’ll miss you forever
As long as you’re gone
I’ll miss you forever
I should write you a song

I’ll miss you forever
Even though you’re not mine
I’ll miss you forever
I hope I haven’t crossed a line

I’ll miss you forever
With all my love
I’ll miss you forever
I’ll send a message to you with a dove
I’ll miss you forever
I wish that you knew
I’ll miss you forever
Maybe someday i'll tell you

Reviews

[KillxThexCowboy]

Oh boy, read this one after "I Want You, Not Him" ..man you've got the waterworks comin girl! Great job, the repetition makes it very unique.

[Clever Forever]

I like the repetition of it. Its very cute. Well done :)

[Jasmine]

Good job. I like how you had I'll miss you forever repeating. The sense of longing you portrayed was great.

[Yina]

That's so cute:) It works out perfectly to have, I'll miss you forever, as every other line:) Very nice!

This is really sweet, Beautiful poetry. You make the repetition work giving that feeling of loneliness and longing for that someone. Bravo!

[TJ]

Nice piece...

[AndyJCash]

Good write, nice structure :)

[Dark Angel ~]

Awesome! :D

[Helpless]

good ending, left the reader wanting more! great work!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool work.