suicidal

I never noticed and

I never knew

how I could've fallen

head over heels for you

now I wish I didn’t

now I wish it wasn't lame

because you weren’t there to catch me

when the anguish came!

you said you loved me, you always did!

you said I was a beautiful kid.

now I hate you, I hope you know..

that I no longer live, or let emotions show.

my heart I hide away

no matter what they say

because its rather broken

a new me is awoken.

thank you ever so much,

for now I am alone,

im heartbroken, im depressed.

and you wonder what?

im alone,

 im afraid

im suicidal.

my thoughts run dark.

do you care?

do you care to help me?

you left for so long!

and when you came back, it was LIES you told me!

is this how you repay me?

tell me.

is. this. how. you. repay. me?

Reviews

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Suicide/Suicidal

Translation

"Hatred turned inwards!"

[Brad]

despite popular belief, we do not have a choice in what fate throws at us...we just cope with what we're handed and hope for the best

[Kenneth The Poet]

Hell hasn't the scorn of a furious female. Very expressive and emotive.

[torments_scribe]

Your anger is quite vivid at the end. I'm sorry that you were hurt in such a way but remember that rising above and living well is a far better revenge. Hopefully you can find a means to take away this person's power over you.

[Mjr. Tom]

Sorry for what you went through, whatever it was. But the poem is great, greatly expressing the feelings that arose. Just remember, the person probably isnt worth dying for.