Night

The moonlight blinds you
Your heart slowly freezes
The night sky is so blue
The other colors deceases

You walk on the cold wet street
Time passes by oh so quickly
The feeling you cant beat
The cold rushes too meekly

You close your blue eyes and dream
You start to float away
You drown your soul with no glee
Just seem to sway

You sit in the bench at the park
And watch the stars twinkle and play
It's no longer totaly dark
As you see the morning come its way

Reviews

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Beautiful imagery my friend.

[Mjr. Tom]

Very good. I like the imagery, as well as the rhyme and flow. However, I like the message the most, that after a cold dark night the sun seems to rise and drive the dark away :).

[AngelAfterlife]

thank you Bradley :)

[Brad]

i have subscribed to your work, very enthralling words and ideas come from that mind of yours.

[E.V. Black]

this is beautiful.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Great poem with wonderful Rhyme, flow and imagery.. excellent job!

[AngelAfterlife]

thank you Matthew :)

[Matthew Kult]

great flow, love the rhyme. Excellent write.

Matthew