Feelings of Failure

Feelings of Failure

A Poem by AngelAfterlife

Feelings of failure

Knowing the rights are shining

Frustrated with reality

Fixing the unfixable

Trapped in this gate

Hardly breathing

Drowning in thoughts

Peers wanting to help

BUt cant

Holding back tears and fears

Hearts collidin

Heart breaking

One thought

One mind

One opportunity

One chance to save myself

TO save you

Hoping your pain fades

Needing to succeed

Success

Success

Not just for my family

Not just for my neighbors

To show the world I made it

Even if i dont make it Pro

My dreams to make something

Something of this life

© 2011 AngelAfterlife


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very nice way of seeing the failure..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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AngelAfterlife
AngelAfterlife

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