Dying on the inside

I wrote this song when i found out my (Now EX) Fiance was cheating on me...

Moonlight shines threw

my opened window.

Tears on my face

fall to my pillow.

Wondering if he's

thinking of me,

Wishing he'd open

his eyes and see,

My heart breaking

My mind racing

My love growing

But my soul is

falling Because

 

I'm Dying on the Inside

Smiling on the out.

I'm Trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guys

just up and leaving,

Wishing he wasnt

out decieving

Hoping he would

start believing

That I'm dying on

the inside.

 

Laying in bed

i think of you.

As the sky turns

from black to blue.

Reminising on all the

years before,

Wishing i could close

all past doors.

I was the target

you were the dart

Why did our love

have to fall apart.

You hit the bullseye

every time,

But this time you

committed a crime

Because

 

I'm Dying on the Inside

Smiling on the out.

I'm trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guy

just up and leaving.

Wishing he wasnt

out decieving

Hoping he would

start believing

That i'm dying

on the inside.

 

Tears of Joy

Tears of Hate,

You left me here

in an upset state.

Crying in a corner

terrified of pain

I tried to tell people

but they called me insane

Because

I miss you

I need you

I love you

but

I hate you

Because

 

I'm Dying on the inside

Smiling on the out

I'm trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guy

just up and leaving

Wishing he wasnt

out deciveing

Hoping he would

start believing

That i'm dying on

the inside.

 

 

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I agreed, very powerful poem you got here. Keep up with this good work. I personally love the way you expressed your feelings here. Great piece!

[Honourfish]

very powerful poem! and the emotion really shows through from actually having the experience. Great write.

[Ruth]

This is really poignant and good lyrics....would love to hear this played :) Great work love......the heart dissolving! xx

[AngelAfterlife]

it is a song.. i wrote it when my ex cheated on me... and i thought it would be nice to share it with some other people who have had the same problem..

Thx Chris :)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

These flow like lyrics, this would be perfect as a song. Excellent work my friend.