Dying on the inside

I wrote this song when i found out my (Now EX) Fiance was cheating on me...

Moonlight shines threw

my opened window.

Tears on my face

fall to my pillow.

Wondering if he's

thinking of me,

Wishing he'd open

his eyes and see,

My heart breaking

My mind racing

My love growing

But my soul is

falling Because

 

I'm Dying on the Inside

Smiling on the out.

I'm Trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guys

just up and leaving,

Wishing he wasnt

out decieving

Hoping he would

start believing

That I'm dying on

the inside.

 

Laying in bed

i think of you.

As the sky turns

from black to blue.

Reminising on all the

years before,

Wishing i could close

all past doors.

I was the target

you were the dart

Why did our love

have to fall apart.

You hit the bullseye

every time,

But this time you

committed a crime

Because

 

I'm Dying on the Inside

Smiling on the out.

I'm trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guy

just up and leaving.

Wishing he wasnt

out decieving

Hoping he would

start believing

That i'm dying

on the inside.

 

Tears of Joy

Tears of Hate,

You left me here

in an upset state.

Crying in a corner

terrified of pain

I tried to tell people

but they called me insane

Because

I miss you

I need you

I love you

but

I hate you

Because

 

I'm Dying on the inside

Smiling on the out

I'm trying to keep quiet

Trying not to shout.

I'm sick of every guy

just up and leaving

Wishing he wasnt

out deciveing

Hoping he would

start believing

That i'm dying on

the inside.

 

 

Reviews

[Bewitching Sensations]

Your not insane babe, things are raw at the moment, it will get better. Time is a great healer, in years to come you will be able to look back on him without pain and see the lesson you have learned by what happened..Forgive him, if you dont you will be the one twisted and bitter while he is out there without a care in the world.. You will get better.. ive just come through something similar so i know where you are coming from x x x

[Brad Nugent]

The words flow well. And, having had these feelings, ouch Those mixed up feelings come through loud and clear. A couple of typos in there, but that is the only criticism I have! Nice work.

[Myenigma]

this was great, i liked the flow to it and your rhyme scheme

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet, sweet piece of work.

[BlackMoonRising]

Emotions drive this poem, even if they are negative ones. Beautiful, yet heart-breaking... It just goes to show that us humans have more of a reason, regardless of what we feel. Great write!

[silentpoet]

SAD AND ALL A FEELING MOST HAVE ENCOUNTERED IF NOT ALL..VERY DEEP AND BEAUTIFUL WORDS..

Beautifully written, emotionally driven. Great job

[Periac]

painful read

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

When we hurt we wonder if the one who hurt us knows or cares. When we hurt others do we think about how they feel? So often we don't. A heartbreaking piece wonderfully penned.

[AngelAfterlife]

thx you guys