Getting back up, just to fall again.

Take a chance before its too late,

people, friends, & family hate,

everyone loves you, everyone cares, 

there by your side as your shedding your tears,

mixed emotions flow threw the wall,

we try to identify them all, 

we work so hard that we become weak,

give up and begin to weep, 

climb back up but continue to fall,

get to the top of the stairs; but fell down them all, 

gave up and gave in to the snakes bite.

you've given it all your might. 

Reviews

[Dhaye]

That is life, like a roller coaster ride
Sometimes it goes up, sometimes down
Just learn to love and live without much pride


Simple but relevant, Angel Marie. Nice job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A snake bite? I like the energy and the drive of the words. Going forward and falling down. I know the feeling. A interesting poem Angel Marie.
Coyote