Crystal Tears

I've cried so many times at night
Yet it doesn't lessen the sadness
A thousand crystal tears each moonless night
Still no one understands me

My emotions have been hidden
I no longer seem weak
Instead I am misunderstood

One hundred tears at sunset
Emotions that are waiting to come ou
Bottled up inside for one thousand years
And finally they burst out

Holding a knife in one hand
Two final tears of bloof
Fallen on the floor
A single sapphire tear covered in blood
Drops to the floor, an unearthly beauty...

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Crying for so long.. and wonder...what a poem made of tears should be..
a gem like a Sapphire,, magical
an shinning poem..love it
For I have learned in not to cry... love it

[The Elder Pine]

You know I really think I know what you mean. I have felt this way before and it was aweful, but with work I got throught the struggle. This piece shows struggle and the breaking point at which some people are forced to give up, and it is a sad piece but the thing is that it is well written and well done and you really express yourself well and paint beautiful scenes with some of the lines that you penned. I really enjoyed this piece, thank you very much for sharing.

"I've cried so many times at night
Yet it doesn't lessen the sadness
A thousand crystal tears each moonless night
Still no one understands me

My emotions have been hidden
I no longer seem weak
Instead I am misunderstood

One hundred tears at sunset
Emotions that are waiting to come ou
Bottled up inside for one thousand years
And finally they burst out

Holding a knife in one hand
Two final tears of bloof
Fallen on the floor
A single sapphire tear covered in blood
Drops to the floor, an unearthly beauty..."