synopsis

 

 

Time Lapse Through Existence

 

Mankind's Blind Deference

 

Total Enslavement, At Vertiginous Speed

 

The Overpowering Mastery Of Greed

 

Final Big Bang!

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

[Tex]

Ha! I love this. this is the second piece of your I have read, and the second on this topic... a favorite of mine. I love the finale. wonderful stuff here.

[Jazique]

Wow that was interesting bringing one into thought as the powerful words linked leading to your last simple words. What a nice short poem.

[Black]

nice
though i like the first last sentence more then your last one
it kind of weakens the poem the last sentence
but that s my honest opinion

[dutch2lips]

a good poem

[Allen Smuckler]

Quite a powerful overview or indictment of mankind....and in such few words...Not an easy thing to do....Liked it, Angel Bird
allen

[Krystal Nicole]

Great poem!! Good choice of words and the arrangement is nice

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Those few words express a lot. Really great poem!