TEDDY BEAR

 

 

 - Teddy bear, my sweet teddy bear

 

 - Every moment, good and bad you share

 

 - Dice however they fall, you care

 

 - Deities never replace you in any despair

 - Yes in my arms all my tears you bear

 

 

 

 - Born out of daddy's old flare

 

 - Every hole, mommy knows to repair

 

 - A constant smile on your face you wear

 

 - Reassuring you will always be there

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jeff]

Wonderful piece.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a beautiful sense of peace that is found in your words... I can remember (believe it or not!) the days when a teddy bear could make me feel at ease and take away the stresses of the day. Love this!

[deeps]

ah! this is so sweet and cute.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe that is so sweet... but it has a deeper meaning to what the teddy bear represents, beyond just a stuffed companion... it reflects the warmth of love the child is surrounded by.

[Geralyn Miller]

My admiration for form, and also witty content.
Small correction, seventh line, It is spelled "repair"