TEDDY BEAR

 

 

 - Teddy bear, my sweet teddy bear

 

 - Every moment, good and bad you share

 

 - Dice however they fall, you care

 

 - Deities never replace you in any despair

 - Yes in my arms all my tears you bear

 

 

 

 - Born out of daddy's old flare

 

 - Every hole, mommy knows to repair

 

 - A constant smile on your face you wear

 

 - Reassuring you will always be there

(copyrighted material)

 

 

Author's Note

Acrostic with monorhyme
Mixed forms

Reviews

[pal]

Nicely written short and sweet poem.
Pal

[AquaWater5674]

This piece was heartwarming...
Made me smile..
Thank You
Debbie

[matrixmark]

Really good littel piece, reminded me of my younger years when I too had a little teddy bear.

Thank you so much for bringing these memories back to me.

Cute but quite powerful piece.

Mark.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

This is pretty good, Angel Bird. Where you been? I miss you.

What kind of teddy bear do you have? Do you have a teddy bear?

[Angel Bird]

Thanks very much. Yes of course I have two favorite Teddies from my childhood. Still have them. I'm a Teddy bear person. Yes I know it's been quite some time since i've been here. I'll try to come here more often again :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Sometimes something so small, like a teddy bear, can become so meaningful and help us in life. Great piece!!

[Angel Bird]

Thanks so much for your kind comment. I truly appreciate.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

I have always appreciate you, Angel Bird. Not a problem. The pleasure was all mine.

[shadow night]

it shows that not just religous belifes can heal a person but as well as somthing so meaningful help heal a person.... as always you show the truth and more.... it makes me miss preschool when i could nap and eat and play have to worry about nothing.

[Katannaism]

Ah~this is so adorable. Brings back all the childhood memories. One should never lose their childish innocence and this projects it amazingly. :)

[therisa]

Reading this poem is
Like a breathe of tranquility
On a very stressful day
Where migraine headache
Rules the day.

[Calypso]

Aww so sweet!

[Fashell]

Good piece. Shows reliability, protection, and warmth.