shining caress

thoughts to a beautiful sunset

 

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Simply breathtaking every time again

to witness such an intimate and romantic moment

between these two marvelous lovers

when the powerful and burning hot sun

caresses over our constantly striving earth,

where the fire deep down inside 

brings even the glacial ice to melt,

and at the peak of their loving embrace

the world gracefully blushes

in the most beautiful shades of red…

 

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Reviews

[Gandré]

This is beautifully innocent. I like the feeling I have when I read this. To feel 'sexually', when one experiences sun, is amazing. This ambiguity is what I love. Such a perfect poem you wrote..And in terms, es ist nicht deine Sprache, ich schätze es um so mehr; nur jemand, wer mehrere Sprachen spricht, sie lebt und untersucht, kann digest such a poetry written by non native speaker. Die Beweisusschließlichkeit kam down zu Null. Just innocence.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

First off nice to see something new from you and secondly what a way to come back... talk about a creative way to describe nature and how the elements work together in harmony... simply brilliant.

[Markymark]

I love poetry about nature. Your beautiful sunset inspired a beautiful write. I would have known/figured what you were talking about even without the note.

Kudos on a really nice piece.

Mark