My love is a burden

My love is a burden

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Song lyrics

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  - Your eyes magically sparkle
  - when they look into his
  - until they reach mine
  - and go blank without shine
  - You once used to love me 
  - so hard letting go of thee

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - You looked so lovely 
  - wind playing in your hair
  - at the beach don't you remember
  - when oh so happy we were?
  - Honeymoon full of love and promise
  - there's so much I'm gonna miss

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - We live together still
  - but the void in you
  - I no longer fill
  - My body aches so bad 
  - as I helplessly watch me
  - slipping out of your heart

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - He stole your heart
  - despite your vow 

  - no need for pretence
  - It cuts my strengths  
  - for I'll have to let you go
  - because I love you so...

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

(Copyrighted material)

 

© 2014 Angel Bird


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Letting someone go cause you love them is the hardest thing we humans have to face I believe. I would love to hear this put to music. I think it would really bring out the life just out of reach behind the expertly inked words.

Makes me wish I had learned how to play the piano years ago....

A great work of effort and skill!
Tara M Stone

Posted 15 Years Ago


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ohhh...so sad. Great sad song. Could perhaps record it? I had several requests on my song lyrics to record, so I will. Look out for that! A Goat From Another Planet (Can't remember whether you've read it yet or not). Great this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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sad but beautiful
i can totally understand how you feel in this! great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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a very beautifully sad love song..it hurts to have yo love, so pure, so true, a burden! honest write!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Wow, this is so touching and sad! i loved the chorus! It all flowed very nicely and it was very deep
Nice work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This conveys such utter hurt with scarily more to come. It', all a burden...but will surely get lighter and with this in mind, it will keep you going, till the solution is found...and your next write will be at peace.
Worded so very nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Babsie Bee XX

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so sad, platonic love hurts so much..... Love is burden for him, for he can't be giving, I can imagine he is suffering for he can't give love.. I hope you find a solution soon...
I also enjoyed your quiz.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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