My love is a burden

My love is a burden

A Poem by Angel Bird
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  - Your eyes magically sparkle
  - when they look into his
  - until they reach mine
  - and go blank without shine
  - You once used to love me 
  - so hard letting go of thee

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - You looked so lovely 
  - wind playing in your hair
  - at the beach don't you remember
  - when oh so happy we were?
  - Honeymoon full of love and promise
  - there's so much I'm gonna miss

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - We live together still
  - but the void in you
  - I no longer fill
  - My body aches so bad 
  - as I helplessly watch me
  - slipping out of your heart

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - He stole your heart
  - despite your vow 

  - no need for pretence
  - It cuts my strengths  
  - for I'll have to let you go
  - because I love you so...

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

(Copyrighted material)

 

© 2014 Angel Bird


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Letting someone go cause you love them is the hardest thing we humans have to face I believe. I would love to hear this put to music. I think it would really bring out the life just out of reach behind the expertly inked words.

Makes me wish I had learned how to play the piano years ago....

A great work of effort and skill!
Tara M Stone

Posted 15 Years Ago


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arrrrr i feel too ..thanks for sharing and well done on getting it written down hope it helped

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awhh :')

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What a sad, heartbreaking poem. I can feel the pain in it.

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..This is heartbreaking, but written oh so well..

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Love is a gift we give .. and it is so hard not to get it back..in some way.. yet still it is good to be true and feel what you feel it is yours and it's real and you can take comfort in that.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Oh, so very heartbreaking....I like the repeating verse. It drives home the sorrow. Well done!

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Ah the toils of heartache.

I guess the up-side is that it gives us ammo for our inspiration. Well done.

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Letting someone go cause you love them is the hardest thing we humans have to face I believe. I would love to hear this put to music. I think it would really bring out the life just out of reach behind the expertly inked words.

Makes me wish I had learned how to play the piano years ago....

A great work of effort and skill!
Tara M Stone

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can certainly see this as a power ballad... it hurts to see the one you love not only fall out of love with you but found a new interest.

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Unrequited love! The lyrics are pleasant enough, I don't know if the chorus will work, it might though!

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