wishful thinking

6 words hammered into verbal stone

 

 

 

---  Rid Of Greed

---  World Is Freed

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is brilliant. i mean it.
wow. impressed. and i feel,
that s not an anagramm by a computer programm?
thanks for your words when reading my poem.
ich schreibe an einem langen st�ck, aber es ist schwierig
so schreibe ich immer ein wenig, daher kam das gedicht,
was du reviewed hast, aus dem real - unreal denken.

[Desert Dreamer]

I hope this happens. Excelling poem!

[RED]

Don't we all wish exactly that! You have said so much in just a few words.Good job!
Keep writing
~Red

[Inci 2]

HAHa.. the very first submission.. this is so good.. let's see who wins!!

[Dalebear]

This has a powerful message behind and a good write

[Angel Baby]

We can only wish,
For it would be perfect bliss.....

Couldn't help myself....
I really do love this writing. thanks for joining the contest. P.W.

[Wildecat]

Short sweet with a powerful message. Well done.

[Dani California]

Amen. I hope you won this contest! It's perfect :)

[ABBY]

wow i never know so little words could be soo powerful. this is a trully great

[Emily Rose]

Wishful thinking - oh, so true! I wish it, too. :-(

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Short sweet and to the point. Well expressed. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.