just live!

just live!

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Written for the 'Six Words' contest

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 ' Life is too precious to waste! '

© 2008 Angel Bird


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This is so powerful and so true

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If we could all learn from your poetic expression here to more deeply value each day, what a different world it would be. Powerfully expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much wisdom is six words. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was powerfully cute!
Six words that tell a simple truth.
Does this mean that if everyone was immortal;
Life wouldn't be prescious any more?
Just a random thought that came to mind! :)

Great Little Ditty!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel- you bring encouraging feelings to light-
this is absolutely well invented 6 word analysis
projecting what it means to look at life
as a gift -to just live- the title could'nt have
been any better. inspired vision, lovely-brilliant

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's amazing how few words can paint a picture, tell a story or convey a message. I've never tried writing in this style before. I think it's brilliant and to the point. Thank you for sharing this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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