tender touch

Haiku 6

Eyes close as lips touch
Hands softly roam tender skin
Stirring love's desire

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is a stunning romantic haiku form, whispered and accentuated capturing sensual beauty with depth
proceeding futher and further with each well placed word, leaving a powerful impression defining
the title "tender touch" there is a soul aspect applied to the design, revealing desire in essence,
nice writing takes the reader to another time and place, to be left in gentle yearning, thanks for sharing

[Sparrow]

Prologue to a love story! Great piece and even though it is cliche, I adored it. Good luck in the contest!

-Sparrow

[Kristin Brecoe]

it is beautiful, but cliche. i still adore it.

[Barbara Walker]

My eyes closed and I remembered hands softly roaming my skin, stirring love's desire within me.What more can a poem do to the reader, but take them there? Excellent! Barbara

[Gravedigger]

How tender indeed. Very good job on capturing the imagination with your powerful words, you had me hooked from the first line. I myself am not much of a romantic writer, but I do appriciate it when I see it done well. I like!