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Haiku 2

 

 

 

 

       - Why destroy all this?

       - Did you not see the beauty?

       - Pure grace of flowers? 

      

Reviews

[vanishing]

Angel
Reading this for exactly what is being said
makes perfect sense
in light of a once paradise
turned corporation:truly money- greedy desire ect
Changing what was once a beautiful planet
But people such as the author in this writing
project the postive perspective
with inspirational effect
Thanks

[Dalebear]

Another beautiful poem

[Desert Dreamer]

Some people are blind to the flowers and natural beauty of the land and only see the money that can be made by destroying it...wonderful poem!

[Ry]

I think that this is on the right track, but that the last line confuses the reader a bit. Is the poem about flowers?
Great job, though!
Haikus are tricky!
-Eli

[Brianna Brie]

Another fine one by you. Splendid work!

[DanaRegen]

Angel,
This is a lovely haiku, thanks for entering in my contest. This expresses a question of why destroy natures true beauty. Personally I dont know but thats when reducing, recycling, and reusing comes in. Anyways great haiku, and good luck in my contest!
-Dana :)

[Daniele]

i really love this haiku. i love many haikus but this is a haiku i love

[OverSoul]

a great haiku. Great use of questions. it made it all the more interesting for me

[alternative_be]

The count is correct, as you told me.
And... I do not like picking flowers or a bouquet, for I know the flowers will die! Give me a living plant and I will nourish it!

[vanishing]

I love the title of this writing
its mystique,
this has soul transcribed imagery
portrait glimpse
written in essence, thanks