brainy ink

just a dream ...

- brain of liquid ink
- exhaling through my pen
- words compiled neatly
- confined in my head

- biding the right breath
- unshackling release
- sailing in a vessel of ink
- onto a virgin paper sea

- cruising for a while - aimlessly
- lining up as it seems - randomly
- spreading happiness by
- marrying - paper and ink

- conceiving philosophy and poesy
- shamelessly absorbed by eyes
- in different colors
- find themselves in

- heads and minds
- exquisite audiences applauding
- editors contending at my feet
- words sheltered in a harbor

- amidst a brainy storm
- all of a sudden � famous as men
- for accomplishing �greatness`
- my blood turned blue as ink �

Reviews

[Nicholas Hallows]

'Brainy Ink'... such a great title and thought. I really enjoyed absorbing these words. The final three stanzas are my favourite, particularly the lines 'absorbed by eyes/in different colors/find themselves in/heads and minds' and 'exquisite audiences applauding'. Nice one. NH

[Emily B]

ooooh, this is so nice. . .

[Rain]

Incredible write. Terrific ending. My wish is that words were powerful enough to make all things as they should be. Rain..

[J.P.O.et]

Yes, we all have 'ink' in our brains
Your ending was priceless as your 'blood turned blue as ink...'
I really enjoyed this Angel, look forward to your work
J.P.O.et