suddenly you'll hear your thoughts ...

Where body and soul meet ...

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-- Go where Nature still reigns,
-- turn on the natural silence,
-- and suddenly -
-- you'll hear your thoughts ...

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Agreeable. I like a strole through a wooded park where I live. I like to go when it's getting dark. Tree's all around, beuity in the sky as you can see the stars. A field to let you mind wonder on. It was a nice place for meditations, until they removed half the trees, and took out much of the hill to place a stage there. Sure it look nice, but it doesn't feel they same. Thank you for this lovely piece.

[J.P.O.et]

Love the message,
Turn off the hustle and bustle
and get back to what is
important
Well Done
J.P.O.et

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this piece has described my writing process, listening to the silence, very powerful piece in such few lines
thank you for entering my contest

[Kara Emily Krantz]

love this. speaking of integrity, you definitely have it here in this piece. the flow isn't as wonderful as i would wish in such a short piece, but what you say is just wonderfully put :)
hugs

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B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!! so short...yet says so much!

[C. Tompkins]

I really like your brevity. I often strive for the fewest words possible, and if I'm lucky, they are powerful. But what really helps a poem of such short length is a title that opens up the possibilities even further. Using one of the very short lines takes away from any further meaning that could be derived. Also, look at the line "and suddenly" Again, in a such a short space, every line has to be like a cinder block dropped on the head. The others are strong, so make that one strong too. Very nice!

[Nykkiicia Cion]

great! simple, concise but brilliant!

[Tim McGovern]

This almost read like a quote from the Tao Te Ching.
The truth needs no adornment.
This stands as a poem and a proverb, excellent job
Thank you
Namaste'
Tim

[Robert Luna]

Such truth being spoken here. You have a way simply stating facts that most seem to miss. Purely a pleasure to bear witness to this wisdom.


Great Job!!!!!

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

succinct and simple but it carries a very resounding truth I really like this even in it's brevity because of the truth that it speaks. Wonderful!

[Jaffa Forbes]

very nice. simplistic but powerful in that sense.
jaff