... and you will excel!

Quote about finding our inner vigours ...

�Open up your minds and souls,
let passions invade and conquer you,
let them guide you,
and you will excel!
For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,
and more gratifying than all the
money in this world will ever be �!�

Reviews

[J.P.O.et]

Good outlook on life,
If you can believe in yourself and have conviction in your beliefs
there can be no value placed on that and you will be fulfilled
Nice work, Angel
J.P.O.et

[Blackbirdsong]

There is a real dignity and strength to this write and even though you said what you wanted to say in a few words those words and thoughts resonate. This almost feels like an anthem of sorts or even a spoken word piece.

[~crazy Beautiful~]

very wise writing, love the mediatative feeling of it
il liked this one very much

thank you for entering my contest

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

This is beautiful and wise and also a very good answer to my questions. Thank you for your kind word and this lovely poem, it opens the eyes of the blind.

[Jaffa Forbes]

cool. wise words indeed
jaff

[Crystal Soul]

Beautiful weave of heartfelt words....Good Write! xo

For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,

[Danielle Asher]

this is something I would have longed for my father to say to me as a child. it is beautifully heartfelt. Affirmation to people we love is so important and your piece so softly and gently puts it in few words. Lovely!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

True and well said !

Chloe
xoxo

[thecoolone52]

yeah fooooollllow your dreams........ kind of poem... i liked it.... a listen to your heart kind of deal. Good poem i really enjoyed it!

[Dezaraye]

This is a beautiful thought and sentiment. I love the hopefulness of your lines.