Season's Of Love

Season's Of Love

A Poem by Angel

Love Love was born in the spring so he proposed

We got married instantly with my cheeks as red as rose

Love's hot in the summer. He doesn't ever leave my side

If he has errands to run he takes me along for the ride

 

Love hibernates in the winter and our love become cold

We argue alot as if our love has grown old

Love dies in the fall. I decide to leave

Thought I was tough but my heart was in grieve

 

I thought the seasons were about to end

I realise I dont want to be less than a friend

I turned from the airport and there he was waiting outside

He sighed in relief and offered me a ride

 

WHEN I HTOUGHT THE TROUBLES WOULD END

THE FOUR SEASONS OF LOVE BEGAN AGAIN

 

 

© 2012 Angel


Author's Note

Angel
There Might be a few grammatical errors because i was in a hurry

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I found this poem very sweet, but sad at the same time. You could edit this to make it even better. For example; you can change the different rhymes so the poem makes more sense and more clean. This poem is very good, just needs improvement in my opinion.

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Beautiful poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


well done. love the idea of a love cycle, although most people don't make it to the second rotation. great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this write very much, it has a sad feel to it.
I really enjoyed this write, nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this poem very sweet, but sad at the same time. You could edit this to make it even better. For example; you can change the different rhymes so the poem makes more sense and more clean. This poem is very good, just needs improvement in my opinion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Angel
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kingston, Japan



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