I Miss You

A poem I made

You’ve been in heaven for a while. 

I wonder how you’re doing. 

I miss you so much. 

I really wish I am able to spend one more day with you one last time. 

I wish you were able to come down and visit me once in a while. 

Every day I know you protect me and check up on me, but I don’t ever see you. 

I miss you so much.

I really wish I could see you grandma. 

I love you always and forever. 

Thank you for always being there to protect me. 

I love you grandma. 

I love you so much. 

Thank you.

Reviews

[KeeD]

This is a really sweet poem. A grandma on earth now just got promoted to guardian angel.
Good work sharing the emotion with your readers.

"I really wish I am able to spend one more day(with)you one last time. " I think you're missing the word *with* in the sentence. I often miss a lot even though I proofread my writings a couple of times.

[Anmarie]

oh dang your right. Thank you. I was probably half asleep while editing it lol. Thanks again for letting me know.