I Don't Know

A poem I made yesterday.

It’s only been a month since we broke up, but it feels like a year or more.

Sadness and loneliness has begun.

I feel like something is missing in my life.

My motivation has disappeared.

My heart feels empty.

My hope and love has weakened.

Tears are shedding.

My world has became dark.

My future looks dark.

The only colors I see in my life is black, white, and blue.

Every day I miss you more and more.

Did I make the right decision.

Was I wrong to let you go?

I miss you so much.

I’m so upset and confused.

I don’t know anything anymore.

I don’t know what to do anymore.

I’m so lost and troubled.

I don’t know anymore.

Reviews

[L.Hansen]

Going through breakups is never fun, no matter which side you're on. But the fact that you're taking your feelings and turning them into something beautiful and creative, is a great way of working through it all.
Hopefully someday the world and the future will seem bright again

[Anmarie]

Thank you for your review Rain. Ya I feel better sometimes when I write them in poems :).

[Rain]

Formatting aside, its good to write these thoughts down, and I love your honesty.

I've seen it written 'whether the person was right for you or wrong for you, separation is always painful.' And there's no better remedy to that pain than releasing the feeling into whatever medium you feel is best.

I hope things start looking up for you soon :)

[Anmarie]

Thank you for the tip. I will probably work on that. I never know when to break up the sentences or paragraphs -_-.

[Lovecraft]

This is a fairly good break up poem. I'd advise you to space it out a bit more as that will improve the structure.

Seldom are break-ups amicable. I like the line wherein you reference the colors you see, it's nice.

Good work. :)