My Broken Heart

New poem I made for a challenge a few days ago

Broken, but not dead.

Loved, but not unloved.

Left, but not forgotten.

My heart is in pieces.

Depressed and lonely.

Lost and confused.

We loved each other so much, but now we’re strangers.

I gave you my heart, I trusted you with my heart.

I gave into your lies and promises.

I believed you’d love me forever and have me by your side for as long as we live.

Now you took me for granted and let me down.

You threw my heart on the ground and left.

Promises broken and shattered.

Love is lost.

Trust slowly fading away.

Trust becomes harder to tame

Moving on is a challenge.

Letting go is hard and difficult.

I was so in love with you and still am.

Hope in my broken heart is still there, but very dull and will fade away soon.

I love you and always will.

I hope and wish you the best of luck.

You say so long and I say goodbye.

We both held hands, looked into each others eyes and said, “Never say goodbye just so long.”

Deep down I feel that we both hope that one day we might meet again and start fresh, but we shall not keep our hopes up forever.

I love you my dear. I hope the best for us and one day start a new chapter together.

Reviews

[Anmarie]

ohh. Dang. I knew that spelling was off -_-. Thank you so much for letting me know. I'll fix that. Sadly I'm not a spell checker so I don't know how to spell every single work correctly lol. I looked at one of my poems and dang I did not want to take patience to spell correctly.

[Lovecraft]

Another good poem regarding that central theme in our lives as humans. It does paint an evocative picture of having a broken heart.

Good work, though you misspelled "tame" as "taime". ;)