Her Heart

Pretty sad and kinda deep poem

She’s on the ground weeping.

Crying, screaming, hurting, sad, wistful.

Her heart is breaking, crying, hurting, dieing.

The acke...

Consuming her.

Her body…

Sore and weak.

Her love…

Lost.

Her hope…

Gone.

All her friends saying that they were right.

Her friends saying they tried to tell her, but she didn’t want to listen.

She feels alone and hurt and like no one cares.

Please god..

Help her.

Help her to feel alive again.

Help her.

Reviews

[L.Hansen]

I think it's rather intense wihout being completely in-your-face og gut-wrenching.
Absolutely touches feelings we can all relate to from one perspective or the other.
I like it

[Anmarie]

Thank you so much for the review. I love this poem I made a long time ago.

[Harlequin]

Awe I really love this. It hits a huge nerve but gently. So many people have had to feel this. Lovely, bittersweet write.