Rain

something I wrote long ago

Rain all day, rain all night, just go ahead and steal my light.

Let your dark clouds give me fright and take away all my light.

Is it too much to ask for a little shimmer?

Cause this cold air is making me shiver.

Rain all day, rain all night just go ahead and steal my light.

Reviews

[♥ Kinnixk]

Nice job Anexi! You have a talent for poems :)

[mariah]

great job!!! it flows so well, and i love how the last line and the first line are the same, i feel like it adds such a great affect. AWESOME WRITE!
-Mariah

[Anexi]

:) thanks

[mariah]

your welcome :P

[Emrys Realmskip]

I loved this a lot! :)
Great work! :)
Savvy

[Anexi]

Thank you

[Matty Bosox]

Very short but excellent poem....I love the wonderful spooky way you use your words....Also has an excellent rythym...Very good stuff