Pain

Something I wrote long ago

Hurts too much to breath

Hurts too much to think

I gave you my heart so that I wouldn’t sink

Into the darkness in which I drown.

You made me believe that I was the one,

But all I ever was; was no one.

So many days drag on in despair,

Because I know now

That you never cared.

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Just as good if not better than Rain....This one has an infinite sadness that is expressed excellently through your words...Once again terrific rhyming and rythym....Very dark and terrific poem