Prologue

 Cold, damp, frozen. 

  Everything was so limited, food, sun light, water; she was forgotten, left to die, forgotten like an old rag thrown into a corner. How long could she go on like this, freezing to death, starving, denigrated? Living in her own personal hell, suffering every day, hoping that she’ll be set free.

She then heard footsteps coming to her cell; she had high hopes that someone was finally here to save her, to finally set her free? Her sprits where shot down; however; when the man that opened the door held a gun in his hand and aimed it right at her. Whimpering in fear she closed her eyes thinking that this might be the end of her life.

The man locked the gun back and fired twice into both of her knees. She cried out in pain as the hot lead scorched her skin and fresh tears rolled down her cheeks. Red scarlet leaked from the new wound that was made, the option of death was starting to look better. She just wanted the pain to end; she was tired of being alone.

 

Reviews

[Gina]

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[JadeForever]

You made me feel her pain. Your descriptions are out of this world! I loved the size of the words as well because it made it easier for me to read. ^.^ This prolouge is very interesting and I cant wait to read more!

-Jade

[khalid]

i think you are so much into horror stories..this is a really crul story, i pity so much with her..

[♥ Kinnixk]

I like the story and the font. Please continue ^.^