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A Poem by Aneto
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(Open-Ended, Part 2)

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When I listen longingly 
Younger overtones unveil 
Dawn alive to endlessly 
Majestically exhale 

Leaps are unrealistic, refusing every no 
Zestfully artistic, but elevated low 

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© 2024 Aneto


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yes, i agree with Angel .. very intriguing ... it's like a riddle .. the consonance and halting, skipping cadence demands attention ... have to find Part 1 now :) very intriguing write
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Aneto

8 Months Ago

Indeed, it was written to be a riddle. A time capsule, buried until the moment of revelation arrives.. read more
An intriguing write here, nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Aneto

8 Months Ago

Yes indeed, thank you! There is certainly a hidden meaning to this poem... I'm pleased that you were.. read more

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Added on March 24, 2024
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Aneto
Aneto

Huntsville, AL



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Welcome, friends! Hope you enjoy these musings... Feel free to comment any hidden meanings or neat noticings. Oftentimes, others will find things I never realized, despite having written them myself! more..

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