Reminiscing

Reminiscing

A Poem by Aneto

I longed to share your world 
Your world brought such delight 
Delight and joy unfurled 
Unfurling petals bright 
Brightly shone our smiles 
Our smiles a fond embrace 
Embrace creative styles 
Styles of childlike grace 
Graceful, fleeting years 
Years of being friends 
Friendship met with tears 
Tears for how it ends 
It ends with just a word 
Words unspoken felt 
Felt a wound incurred 
Incurred the blame we dealt 
We dealt with pain and loss 
And loss infused our joy 
Our joy now free from dross 
Dross He must destroy 
Destroyed the friendly blaze 
Blaze a path prolonged 
Prolong the missing days 
Days for which I longed

© 2024 Aneto


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Love this! And how it flows together

Posted 10 Months Ago


Aneto

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Kaitlyn! It is one of my favorite patterns that I have tried so far.

~Anet.. read more
i loved this so much. so creative.
like bread crumbs left behind to follow from the last word to the next line.
all of it able to begin again. a never ending poem.
{brilliantly written. love the message as well.}

Posted 10 Months Ago


Aneto

10 Months Ago

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words and insightful review! Hope you have a blessed day today.<.. read more
living lavender

10 Months Ago

any time and you too!
:)

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Added on January 25, 2024
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Aneto
Aneto

Huntsville, AL



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