I will miss you sometimes,or couple of years!

I will miss you sometimes,or couple of years!

A Poem by AneteOak
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This is youth,silly,messy and absolute amazing with all the flavors in it!

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Candles in this room were already burned,
white faces moved from place to place
to find the love for the moment.
We were stuck here for a while,
maybe one hour or a couple of years.
Our lives received so many chances,
but we said goodbye to most of them.
We are lucky and we don’t care,
we are free so we don’t take responsibility!
We sing cheap lyrics and drink cheap blood 
from each other's sad story’s.
We eat cheap bread and not pay bills.

And when this will pass,
I will miss you,
only sometimes
or a couple of years!

© 2018 AneteOak


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AneteOak
English is not my first language,please ignore my grammar,I try my best!

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I enjoyed it , I love your writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


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AneteOak

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it means a world to me.

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Added on July 30, 2017
Last Updated on March 9, 2018
Tags: #youth, #love, #freedom, #careless

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AneteOak
AneteOak

Dalarna, Sweden



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Just daily or monthly thoughts. All sentences/poems are written by me only. more..