G.O.D

A start over, and ending

Thus the sounds grow in treble, astounds the simple delicate.
Has thy gone on long enough, applauding a fear of elegance.
They'll tremble now, oh' how they will tremble now...
Our vehicle to destiny, a trophy to blaspheme. All the while they'll shall never.
A stoic nerving gaze hopeless, fragile as before now lasting forever more.
A tidal wash of guilt, string to bone.
A somber mine of lashing, grit to stone.
They'll tremble now, oh' how they will tremble now.

So over after...
Oceans of calm, stirred pools of season.
The hallow gone, death by reason.
We trembled then, oh' how we trembled then.
Savoir on wings, not far to the truth. But a single significant choice of the muse, satisfied.
War the called them, death and war.
Shadowed by veils of unclinged tapestry, vibrant of art.
Pests they shouted, vile and unclean.
Pustulant sores in tainted mouths, like lies to the youth.
Starving we screamed, our loins echoing.
A hollowed insomnia, never ceasing to be claimed.
We trembled then, oh' how we trembled then.

The sun warms or graves, we sprout limbs to reach for its light.
Last time, we hadn't had the right...
- we're not acceptable -

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"The sun warms or graves, we sprout limbs to reach for its light.
Last time, we hadn't had the right...
- we're not acceptable -"

[Sami Khalil]

"So over after...
Oceans of calm, stirred pools of season.
The hallow gone, death by reason.
We trembled then, oh' how we trembled then."

Nice style you have , sir and a generous heart to share with us. Glad to visit...:)..................

[weatherbee]

You definitely got allot of talent. I was digging your word combinations. I didn't care for your subject manner though, but over all I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Thanks for sharing :-)

[Andy Lewis]

This is an account of what i see the revelation to be like ..fist all will not believe and then they would realize that they was wrong ...this is about those who were not raptured

[Cool Girl]

this was amazing!!!
It sent chills down my spine..
Great job, you're so talented!!
The second stanza was my favorite! :)

[Andy Lewis]

Thank you so much!!.. I think it might be my favorite as well

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome! :)

[Mari K]

Wow! Why has no one reviewed this!! So dark and powerful! Great write.

[Andy Lewis]

😕 I don't get many reviews, I'm not sure why? I do my best to review others, I don't know if maybe my words get lost on some and they can't follow or if I just for lack of a better word "suck" that badly ........but thanks for the review it means alot

[Cool Girl]

Try to get more friends! Send out more friend requests!!! I have about 100+ friends lol
I can send read requests out to some of them if you'd like..

[Mari K]

You definitely don't suck at all!! Keep writing. Im not here all the time but Im definitely going to read and review!

[Andy Lewis]

Your right,..I shoul, I guess in an way I "feel" stired about asking for a friend...but I'll get to it, I've just recently joined, so I'm just "testing" the waters so to say

[Cool Girl]

Okay cool! Well, I'm always here if you need advice :)