I'm not your mistake, so please don't correct me, infect me with lies, cut my life from existence, your obsessive, relentless, perfected persistence. I'm not your mistake, put your rubber away, I won't be erased, by the truth of today.
I'm not your mistake, I'm not your correction, I'm not the wrong answer, but I'm far from perfection.
I'm not your mistake, so don't break me in rage don't crush me, I'm not just the words on the page, I'm not your mistake so don't judge me like art, after all, it's from failing, that improving can start, I'm not your mistake, so please don't correct me, I respect that you're trying, but you can't redirect me.
Powerful piece of work and very well thought out and written, some people
think they have an answer for everything, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I often found myself criticising others though I've started to realise I was wrong to do so despite .. read moreI often found myself criticising others though I've started to realise I was wrong to do so despite 8 years of bullying which was ultimately a case of being told I was a mistake and told that I should change who I was
Aaahhhh....truth spoken, said like it is......often people doing this think they are doing us a service to "fix" us, not realising we are quite okay remaining just the same...... :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Absolutely. I made this after someone criticised my beliefs but I feel it applies to everyone. Calli.. read moreAbsolutely. I made this after someone criticised my beliefs but I feel it applies to everyone. Calling someone fat doesn't get them to start dieting, it just makes them feel insecure and upset
I'm Andrew, an 18 year old from the UK. I wrote my first poem when I was 10 but only discovered a passion for it when I was 16 after I found I was able to communicate through the words I wrote, someth.. more..