I'm not your mistake so please don't correct me

I'm not your mistake so please don't correct me

A Poem by Andrew Williamson
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It's bad enough that I criticise myself..

"
I'm not your mistake, 
so please don't correct me, 
infect me with lies, 
cut my life from existence, 
your obsessive, relentless, 
perfected persistence. 
I'm not your mistake, 
put your rubber away, 
I won't be erased, 
by the truth of today. 

I'm not your mistake, 
I'm not your correction, 
I'm not the wrong answer, 
but I'm far from perfection. 

I'm not your mistake, 
so don't break me in rage 
don't crush me, 
I'm not just the words on the page, 
I'm not your mistake 
so don't judge me like art, 
after all, it's from failing, 
that improving can start, 
I'm not your mistake, 
so please don't correct me, 
I respect that you're trying, 
but you can't redirect me.

© 2015 Andrew Williamson


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felt the need to give you a standing applause and high five you all at once..slam dunk..off to read more

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Williamson

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you!
Powerful piece of work and very well thought out and written, some people
think they have an answer for everything, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Williamson

9 Years Ago

I often found myself criticising others though I've started to realise I was wrong to do so despite .. read more
Aaahhhh....truth spoken, said like it is......often people doing this think they are doing us a service to "fix" us, not realising we are quite okay remaining just the same...... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Williamson

9 Years Ago

Absolutely. I made this after someone criticised my beliefs but I feel it applies to everyone. Calli.. read more

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Added on February 11, 2015
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Tags: poem, poetry, self worth, ambition, mistake

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Andrew Williamson
Andrew Williamson

London, South East, United Kingdom



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I'm Andrew, an 18 year old from the UK. I wrote my first poem when I was 10 but only discovered a passion for it when I was 16 after I found I was able to communicate through the words I wrote, someth.. more..

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