Gravity of Love

I have one problem with love,

It’s all about heading down,

you fall for somebody,

or you’re crushed and defeated,

yet you never hear someone say

they stood up completed,

and sure,

argue that love brings a high,

forever together,

till one of us dies,

but you can’t help but notice,

that love’s a downhill slide,

you go down on somebody,

if you ever decide,

To get a little frisky,

To get a little brave,

you’re going down in love

by the way you misbehave.

When you want a hand in marriage,

you will go down on one knee,

and kneel there in hopes they care,

‘Please will you marry me?’

The problem with emotion,

and the love that I expressed,

is my heart dropped, when your love stopped,

and now I’m cold, depressed.

My first love was my hardest,

my second, my mistake,

my third was desperation

my fourth brought me heart break.

The problem is with loving,

we walk down the aisle see,

we’re going down, we sink, we drown,

for love, is gravity.

~ Andrew 

Reviews

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Holy Crap. This was awesome!
Although I have to argue, not everybody goes down with love. But I do love how you made your references! It was genius in fact!!
Very great work!!

[Andrew Williamson]

I'm sure there are many lovers out there who would object but from the perspective of someone who hasn't had any good experiences with love, this was the only way I could look at it

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I understand completely. All my experiences have ended badly. Hence the reason I'm still single. Lol. It was very good. Don't get me wrong. I really enjoyed it!!

[Andrew Williamson]

I'm glad you did :) It took a while to think up all the references but I was quite pleased with myself when I'd finished it ^.^

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yes. It was excellent! You did a wonderful job!

[Jamestown]

Very interesting take, something I hadn't thought of in this way,thanks for sharing.

[Andrew Williamson]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, was a thought that came out of nowhere but turned out to be quite true