Puzzled

We are all made up of pieces, but have you ever wondered whether everything fits together perfectly?

If you find me sat in contemplation

Please track me during the separation

Because I don’t believe I’m one anymore

           I’m coming apart; up in the sky and down to the floor

 

                        The fragmented shards float

          Unconsciously

 Effortlessly

   Without direction

                                             Without connection

 

            A Neil Gaiman book

           The Californian air

Boston by Augustana

Writing with a pad and pen

Roast dinner on Sunday

                               The need to mend a broken heart

            The urge to get up and go

                       The hope to click once more

 

                                   

I am but one puzzle on the shelf to seize

           Yet I beg, won’t you solve me please?

Author's Note

The structure is meant to be spaced, but I don't think it's shown as clearly as it was in the word document when I wrote this.

Reviews

[李[A]]

I'm really appreciating your writing! The structure of this poem like most of your others is amazing. The part that's antithetical though, is the free-form structure. I love how the words are so loose so that they just fall like a stream of conscience. Great job on this poem and the message that's conveyed through the structure: like a motif of structure. Beautiful work!

[Omar Fendri]

it is placed in my favorite list for sure... cleverly written with artistic sentences and chosen words...

"The fragmented shards float
Unconsciously
Effortlessly
Without direction
Without connection" >> the idea and the imagination are both well painted and bind-bogglingly expressed... JE LA VÉNÈRE:::

[SamBug]

Very clever and original. I definitely enjoyed this

[whispereversolightly]

Cleverly written like the set up as well.

[Talia Renee]

I love reading your stuff. You're so original, and I never get bored of your writing. Amazing job, again!

[Poe Redd]

Wow, what a great poem. Love it. I feel like this so often and you word it so perfectly.

[dreaming dame]

So cool. :) I love this!
...'won't you solve me please?' I feel like that quite often. :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful! Well-written! I enjoyed this poem very much. =D I think the spacing was good. I like the emotions in this.. great write! ^o^

[Fairy Willow]

Nice write. Im afraid i can not puzzle myself together so would be of no help to you dear. Lol. I think the spacing worked well, made it feel whole and made it stand out more. Enjoyed this piece. :)