Separate and Collapse

First one in a while and I apologise for that.

You’re like a greased rope above a trap hole

I can grab your attention

But soon I’ll slip into the abyss

 

I’m like a sturdy home built on quicksand

Temporary comfort

Yet nothing incessant or lasting

 

Imagine we’re wires of fine string

Cut short by blunt scissors

As we part into fraying nothings

 

We’ll pass each other

We’ll even still talk

But not like before

I can’t maintain us

 

I’m like a supernova out in space

Come in close from afar

Then fade to dark: a fond memory

Author's Note

Not a love story, but rather the inability to keep friendships staying as strong as they once were.

Reviews

[Seashell]

The fact that you think along these lines, proves you are a worthy being. Some friends drop you, for no reason and don't want to rekindle the friendship and others for different reasons, but are dubious/scared to make the first move to get things back as they were. No matter the reason, we must talk,talk and talk....iron it out..build it up..and start again where an even greater relationship should be formed only to last for ever. I say 'greater' as all the do's and don't's are amicably resolved enabling you both to reach a higher rung on the 'ladder of respect' for each other, to create a wonderful thing to enjoy. If it's rejected then it's their loss Andy !
You did real good here
Thanks for share
Babs x

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ahh, very nice. Friendships that slowly tear apart is hard as well. Its quite painful. I love the imagery of your poem. Friends can go only so far... if its meant to last. Great write! =D I love it!

[Talia Renee]

I love the feeling of loss but acceptance (that's what I got anyways!). Most poems about drifting apart ARE about love, so it's refreshing to see one about friendship.

[DearSweetAgony]

I love the flipping metaphors in this write.
This is truely a wonderful poem.
Flawless Job, I enjoyed reading.

[SinnerInspired]

Its intriguing& mysterious Love it!