"Just friends"

"Just friends"

A Poem by lost_poet

"Just friends"

You say we are just friends...
Then why do I feel your taste on the tip of my tongue?
Why do I know how soft are your lips,
How fast your heart beats?
Why can I touch your hair, pull you close...
How is that fair?

If we are just friends, tell me why I know, 
how sweet you moan when my lips touch the skin of your neck?

...
Are you ashamed tho? 
You hide your face in your cape when your "friends" pass by.
Why?
So you don't have to be seen with me?
Is that so bad that I am not THAT girl people connect you with?
...
So tell me, friend... is this our dead end?

© 2024 lost_poet


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Smiling tho' should not. How many times I've read words like yours.. although they have such genuine turns of phrase that they touch then - linger. ' So tell me, friend, is this our dead end?'

Your writing has true meaning. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Smiling tho' should not. How many times I've read words like yours.. although they have such genuine turns of phrase that they touch then - linger. ' So tell me, friend, is this our dead end?'

Your writing has true meaning. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This resonating wonderfully..
The expression of care by hurting each other... (most of wattpad stories I read before used to like that... but that doesn't even matter 😅, when we are having beautiful poem here)...


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The second part of this one, seems to be expressing more intense emotional angst and feelings of doubt; than how it starts off. Even so, the tender signs of love which are initially identified; seem to clash clearly with the generally accepted contact level of an ordinary friendship. At the very end, you sense that whatever kind of relationship this is; you know subconsciously that it's in jeapordy and on the brink of ending? If only that supposed friend, admitted his true thoughts, feelings and intentions..? Thankyou for sharing, and keep writing..!

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