Hearts Collide

A poem i wrote, which may or may not be used in a song at some point.

The heart is a fist covered in blood

my heart is a sad face carved out of wood

your heart is a picture that no-one could paint

my heart's kept behind a fence with no gate

Your heart is a box with fond memories inside

my heart is a bin bag which i use to hide

your heart is a room where tomorrow awaits

my hearts a balloon that slowly deflates

Your heart is a sky where the planets align

my heart is a hard drive which breaks all the time

You heart is a soft bed in which you awake

my heart is a cage from which i can't escape

Your heart is a train that will never derail

my heart is an organ that one day will fail

my heart keeps on beating although times are tough

your heart belongs to me, and for me that's enough

Reviews

[Andy Crawford]

Thanks very much guys, your feedback means a lot

[closed..acct]

This is quiet amazing,
wondrful flow here.

[Gandré]

The poem sounds like lyrics for a Gothic song kind of - I liked it, the repetitions worked, they intensified the content.

[Dillon Cotter]

Awesome right bro.

-Will