The Spanish Revolution

Viva la revolución! (55 word short story)

Viva la revolución!

         Viva la revolución!

                  Viva la revolución!

The loud cries rang out, echoing off all four walls of the classroom as we crouched behind a barricade of desks and hurled ammunition toward the enemy who stood in the doorway armed with a textbook.

I have never seen a more hopelessly bemused Spanish teacher.

Author's Note

Appreciate any feedback! :)

Reviews

[Gaurav]

Funny and amusing. Crisp yet giving us doses of childhood memories.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks for your review Gaurav. Glad you found it funny :)

[Dante Carlisle]

Definitely got a laugh outta this one.

[Stan Lee]

I'm glad you got a laugh Dante. :) Thank you

[Lorry]

Short and sweet. Is that a thing about Spanish teachers, they come with bemused setting included? I'm sure mine did too, but that might have been me answering in French that did that :)

[Stan Lee]

Thanks for your review Nemo :)

[Lorry]

welcome :)

[Jacob Clifford]

Cute story. Good to know kids these days get a quality education.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks Clifford :) We didn't learn Spanish at our school but if we had this story probably would have been true. My class at school... smh.. those poor teachers :D

[Shannon]

Many revolutions start in the classroom. But I don't think this is what is meant by that. Quick, entertaining, chuckle worthy. ☺️

[Stan Lee]

Chuckle worthy! Woot! Thanks S.Mi. :) Glad you liked it.