P7

P7

They arrive at the pond and jump in with a smile

"Thanks Mr Turtle. I think I'll stay for a while."

The End

Author's Note

P7

Reviews

[korhark]

super cute, really liked it.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks korhark. Glad you enjoyed.

[LastMonth]

Lol.

Adorable.
Thank you.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks LM :) Glad you liked it.

[LastMonth]

Something fishy about that Turtle though.
What is his motive?
What is he hoping to gain?
What is his real origins? How much does he know?
WHY Andronicus, WHY?!

I'm just messing around. But yeah that turtle is suspect.

[Stan Lee]

lol, you are hilarious ^_^

[Shannon]

Very cute. What a helpful little turtle!

[Stan Lee]

:) Thank you so much S.Mi! Keep an eye out for a new children's story coming out soon... well as soon as I finish the illustrations. :)

[Shannon]

Looking forward to it!

[PaintedBirdy]

cute story. my favorite part was on P6 when Mr Turtle tells the hippo to hurry up! i'm still laughing 52 seconds later.

[Stan Lee]

^_^ Thank you so much for reading this. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It's making me laugh that this made you laugh! And for a whole 52 seconds! lol. Thanks again. :D

[PaintedBirdy]

12 months later and i'm still laughing about this. my new favorite part is P1 when Andronicus the Hippopotamus lived in a pond :) are these new illustrations too??

[Stan Lee]

Thanks so much. 12 months later and I'm still laughing at you laughing. No new illustrations. You know how long it takes me to do them :( And when people start re-reviewing, it's definitely time to get my act together and get something new happening!

[Taylor]

Cute, cute, cute! I read a lot of children's books these days and this one should be published. Did you d the illustrations? You, talented girl!

[Stan Lee]

Oops, guess I forgot to thank you for this. Thanks Taylor!! :) I'm glad you liked it. The illustrations were just random pics off the internet and a little editing in paint. Thanks for your kind review. :)

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I can see it as a little children's story book, the kind you find in the waiting room of a children's doctors office! And probably the kind my mom once read to me, when I was in that crucial stage of development, almost ready to read on my own, but not quite! This is a wonderful effort of contribution to that literary form, the most important one of them all: Encouraging tiny people to take interest in learning to read in the first place. Well done, and nicely done, in style!

[Stan Lee]

Jake, Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on this story. Glad you liked it. It was fun to write and to be honest it took Sean & I all of about 10 minutes to think up. It was harder finding the pictures on google. lol. :)
Thanks again Jake - really appreciate it.

[Woody]

well done, Andrea :) cute little one. I wish my kids were still small. they would've loved it.
well chosen pics!

correct me if I'm wrong but you're not married yet, right? so you don't have children. I think you'll make a terrific mother :)

[Stan Lee]

Thank you so much Woody! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review this little story and it's random google images+paint illustrations. :)

Correct Woody, I am not married. (Your usage of the word 'yet' fills me with hope though) :D
Merci beaucoup Woody!