Good night

May your rest be full and deep
May your dreams be calm and sweet
May angels watch over you as you sleep
My beautiful friend.

Author's Note

:) Appreciate any feedback :)

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. A very nice warm wish of good night to a friend. I like it.

[Stan Lee]

Thank you Najam. Glad you liked it. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

you're welcome ☺

[PaintedBirdy]

how do i get the audio version of this poem? possibly played with clarinet music in the background?

love it :)

[Stan Lee]

lol, laughed so hard at this. :D Thanks a lot! Gives me something to think about. Glad you liked it. :)

[Érenn]

I like it much ^^ Felt very prayer like, and the brevity deserves an applause, although I feel you could also end the last line with a rhyme if possible. I feel there's a deeper meaning for you to write this down. Possibly the friend of yours suffering from insomnia or is stressed out a lot thus not having proper sleep? Again i could very well be wrong and this was simply a poem to say Goodnight ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[Stan Lee]

Thank you very much Errenn. Good to hear that you could feel all that emotion in such a short rhyme. You're right, it is a special poem that was written for a friend that was/is going through a lot of tumultuous times. I know what you mean about the last line. I just haven't ever thought of anything better that makes sense in my mind. Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated. :)

[J3ssInJupit3r]

This has a prayer like feel to it. I really liked it but just a thought, maybe at the end have it rhyme with the rest so it ends as it begins? Just a suggestion, don't take this as I don't like it how you wrote it. It is original and all you so it is perfect. :) I just thought I would put the thought out there. Thanks for sharing!

[Stan Lee]

Thanks J3ssin. I appreciate your comments and suggestion. You're so right, it does have a prayer like feel in which instance I hope that anyone can take it and modify it to their own needs/desires. I wrote this specifically for a friend but as others have suggested the last line could be changed to "child" or as you say, something that rhymes. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. :) :)

[Paavana Varma]

Such a sweet poem.Thank you for sharing ^_^

[Stan Lee]

Thank you Paavana! I appreciate your feedback. :)

[Viv Wade]

Aw, I wish someone would recite this to me when I go to bed each night, I'm sure I would sleep like a baby and have lovely dreams! Makes me feel all fuzzy...

[Stan Lee]

:) Aw, fuzzy is good! Thanks so much for your kind feed back Silent.

[Captain Rilen]

A beautiful poem Andronicus. Always a pleasure to read your work, truly a lovely and tranquil piece.

[Stan Lee]

Thank you Kirk! All credits go to friends like you who inspire me to poetry. :)

[G. Coleman]

I really like how those four lines go toegether. The words express your best wishes to those reading. It sounds like something you say to a child while they are tucked snuggly under the covers, although I don't have a child, and others don't take kindly to you going into their children's rooms at night to read poetry. Love your work, sweet dreams to you.

[Stan Lee]

:D For some reason your comment has me crying with laughter:'D I guess with a face like the one in the picture I can't really blame people for not letting you read to their children at night. :'D Anyways not to worry - I don't have children either so I just write soppy poems for my friends. :P If I ever have a child we can just substitute the last word for "child"
Thanks so much for your positive feedback G.Coleman. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Gentle and kind wishes for a nice sleep. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stan Lee]

Thanks Coyote! Compliments like this mean a lot coming from a master like you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are too kind and you are welcome.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Beautiful ... Very Calming poetry. This kind of sleep is the BEST ^_^
Again I loved your this poem :)
Thanks for sharing!

[Stan Lee]

Thanks Dreamer. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. sweet dreams Dreamer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe ThankU :)