Barriers

Barriers

A Poem by AndrewWrites

Barriers 

We as humans 

Love to keep each other out 

One Species 

Yet so divided 

Our Races 

Our Religions 

Our barriers 

We build them high 

We all share the same organs 

The same vital things 

Yet we see ourselves 

So different 

But we are the same 

One species 

No races 

All as one 

Different minds 

The same animals 

© 2017 AndrewWrites


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AndrewWrites
Feel free to review, or tell me how you felt. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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This is a really powerful piece of work. Also, your last line I find to be a very true statement.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank you. :) And yes, I do as well. Humans seem to put ourselves so high as to think we are better .. read more

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Added on January 27, 2017
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Tags: Barriers, Division, Society, Race, Religion, Humanity

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AndrewWrites
AndrewWrites

ocala, FL



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Im an 18 year old writer from Ocala Florida trying to get better with my writing as I go. Currently attempting to write a book. I am not inactive, I have just been more focused on my book so if my wri.. more..

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