Broken Heart/Heart Attack

Just to start off a day of writing.

Should I be frightened?

Should I even care?

That this chest is heaving,

gasping for air?

Is there something wrong

or I am just reacting

overly-done to my

muscles' relaxing?

This heart is burning,

or is it yearning?

Am I just wishing away my life?

The air is freezing,

my head is reeling,

I think I've ran out of time.

Reviews

[Shadey Jadey]

-Applauds-
Very deep write you have here. Great job :)

[John]

Thank you, one of my less-refined works, I think, haha, but I try.