Pysch

Last year was a tough one.

Alas, that boy

who stumbled out after

he bore his heart

as true is true,

and welcomed was

back to the true fold

embracing normal life,

its warming hold.

Woe to the boy

who dared an entrance

this lofty abode,

or cuckoo's nest,

and bore his heart out

onto a stage and

put the cure

to the test.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

deep...sad...nicely penned and best regards, Dell

[Monster ^.^]

the intention the poem is complete in itself, and is delivered thoroughly in such short lines. Superb :)

[Kelsey]

Wow, this is very powerful. It's looking like I'll be a fan of your writing. I really like how you format your poems, and (I hope this comes off as a compliment, as it's intended to) I love how you kind of subtley express yourself. It's powerful in its subtlety.

[John]

thanks, I was worried I was being a little too subtle.