LanaA Story by Andrew J ProverbsThis is an experimental piece that I've had in the back of my head for a long time. I've included it under the science-fiction heading, for lack of a more appropriate place to put it.
To squeeze a lie out of a truth; that's the power of our race.
In the dry dusty desert pan, I met a girl who almost killed me for my hat. She told me her name was Lana. But I knew she was lying, for she no more had a name than did the wind that whistled through the rock. Maybe 'Lana' was a pleasant sound from her past, a reminder of her mother's warm knee or the safety of a closed encampment. Something from before the burning, the hardening. When eyes had something else in them than the hunter's gleam; when hands were for caressing. She was young in body, but her mind had been used up; probed, robbed, her hopes dessicated. She wears sandals now that flap against the bedrock. She trudges towards a mirage, as do we all. Her pack jolts against her shoulder, a sharp edge making a wound that has scabbed over many times. And I wept for her, though I had no tears; my body could not spare the water. © 2012 Andrew J ProverbsFeatured Review
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StatsAuthorAndrew J ProverbsBurnie, AustraliaAboutWhen I was very young, my Dad gave me his dog-eared copy of 'The Lost World' by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. After I read that book, the world was never the same. Doyle captivated me with his grand adv.. more..Writing
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