No VisitorsA Story by AndrewHA short story about a man on a hospital bed. Go to andrewhenleywriting.wordpress.com for more of my writing.A tangled
thorn bush of tubes consumes a hospital bed. Inside their plastic sarcophagus,
at this stage as ornate as they are necessary, a man is trapped in a medically
induced purgatory. His palms are
rough, callused and tanned like tough leather. The skin on his hands are thick
like work gloves after a life of blue collar evolution. His elderly body has
retained the basic muscles of youth, but in an atrophied state. A lifetime of
sun and sweat has stained his complexion an earthy maroon. He has two
children, no wife, and no visitors. When it was young and in bloom, his heart
was broken and poison leaked out. His wife left him like a steamroller; it was
slow, it was painful, it squeezed everything out of him and left just an
imprint. The broken heart was a catalyst, the poison in his veins the puppet
strings. The way he looked at his children. The way he pulled his arm back. The
way he clenched his fist. She had her
mother’s smile. He had his
mother’s eyes. He had two
children and no visitors. Inside his nest of life-support, he flatlined. © 2013 AndrewH |
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